Research Paper

I believe for my first college research paper, I did relatively well. There are a lot of things I still have to work on but as my first draft, I think I did okay. Looking back at my paper with revisions on it I see the things I need to fix including, better in text citations since some of my stuff comes across as my opinion rather then something I found from a  source, and better organization within the paper. It seems a little jumpy and I need to change it to make each paragraph have a direct point that I am defending. Once I fix these mistakes I think my paper will be much better and enjoyable to read.